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Poem The seed is sewn

Discussion in 'WildStar Fan Creations' started by Dyraele, Jan 13, 2013.

  1. Dyraele

    Dyraele "That" Cupcake

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    They run, they hide, each hour, each day
    The lost, unwanted, are cast away
    Exiled forever, they've nowhere to turn
    All ties are lost, all bridges burned

    As old grow weary and young abound
    They search for home, but none is found
    A small reprieve, a short respite
    To lift the spirit, to see a light

    The edge, the Fringe, soon draws near
    Not much is known beyond, we fear
    To break the edge or stay within
    A plan is drawn, they will begin

    A light does shine, a hope is seen
    Could this be home, a land, a dream
    Spirits rise and cheers they shout
    They veer the ships and come about

    A strange new world, but not alone
    They hesitate, but fear not shown
    The natives welcome is gladly received
    They'll have respite, a short reprieve

    Each hour, each day, it does pass time
    But now it ties, it builds, it binds
    New friendships forged, new allies cast
    The seed is sewn but not the last
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  2. Black Wolf

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    Aiming for some more apparel to poke Maddog's eyes out? :p

    Excellent job once again!
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  3. Kurik

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    Very awesome, you should get a special in-game title this time. :)
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  4. ObliviousPrime

    ObliviousPrime "That" Cupcake

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    another great poem. great job.

    or maybe an NPC that recites these poems and make him a bard
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  5. Maddog Charlie

    Maddog Charlie Cupcake-About-Town

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    You are one uber talented guy Dyraele without a doubt, Carbine should buy you a complete wardrobe for this one (I hear the SoCal shorts are quite the attraction for the ladies ;)) at the very least you should be in that friends and family program or at least a couple of weekend visits to the game. Superb work you need to have these framed and on your wall.
  6. Dyraele

    Dyraele "That" Cupcake

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    Thanks all, I appreciate the comments. It's very rewarding when people enjoy reading what I enjoy writing.
  7. Dyraele

    Dyraele "That" Cupcake

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    BTW, in case anyone is wondering, I chose sewn over the normal sown for a reason since it plays into the tapestry of life.
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  8. Maddog Charlie

    Maddog Charlie Cupcake-About-Town

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    was wondering but then figured that too, very neat:)
  9. Shady

    Shady Cupcake-About-Town

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    *Protostar mode: On*
    Can I interest you in an Exiles guild?

    Seriously though, great poem man!
    Hats off!

    Edit: BTW, my first like on WSC went to that post, that's just how good it is ;)
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  10. Scooter

    Scooter Carbine Studios

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    Amazing!
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    I read this with a bit of a southern accent in a deep gravelly voice...cause that was the vibe I got after the first few lines, hehe. Like a campfire tale.

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